October 27th, 2013, 7:00 pm

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Reply JoKeR, April 1st, 2013, 6:50 pm

Heavily edited page to enhance the scene.
I hope you like it.

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Reply Rices (Guest), October 29th, 2013, 1:45 pm

Nice one!
just the place where the sword is looks abit odd in the 4th panel, it would be unlikely that he can put the feet intime between himself and the blade wich should be at hip/belly height of Sogren ... well i can be wrong aswell and we call it Cameraangular ! :D, yeah the 2nd idea sounds far better, and those Tinmans are smaller than Sogre. ( let me live in my illusion ^^ )

Reply JoKeR, October 29th, 2013, 3:54 pm

The Puppetstalker is a little bit taller than Sogre but because of his ape like movements does he look smaller.

I hoped the reader would notice the foot on the right of the 4th panel.
The "Tinman" is already on his move to catch the blade.

hm... (-___-) I failed.
But I leave it as it is now.

Thanks for the comment I really appreciate it. (^___^)

Reply Rices (Guest), November 2nd, 2013, 5:45 am

you are welcome, you don't want that i draw the comics trust me, stick mans comics are more professional than my skills.
Just the height thing was something which i liked to figure out for you so you can improve yourself in these terms, or enlighten me. :D
Yes i have recognized the feet, that's why it was odd in this case ( especially if they a taller than Sogren. damn "jelly puppets" worse than a mannequin! ) :D
but we can say too much movement between the pictures, so it was odd in my mind based upon anatomy which is present in my head ^^

mir kommt bloß die Position des Schwertes welches Hinab "saust" zu tief vor im vergleich zur nötigen Biegung des Rückgrat um das schwert parrieren zu können, aber wie oben schon geschrieben kann es auch nur an meiner Vorstellungskraft liegen, dass ich nicht genügend Fantasie dafür habe, dass die so Biegsam sind in so kurzer zeit. ^^
Aber das Zeigt noch mehr die sind extrem Gefährlich :D



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