KatraN-208

February 26th, 2017, 8:50 pm

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Reply JoKeR, February 26th, 2017, 8:53 pm

establishing shot! I had fun with those trees. And with a new drawing technique, I can ink them much faster than before.

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Reply Flik, February 26th, 2017, 9:37 pm

Ohhh, those trees look awesome! Really neat texture.

Also, a couple minor wording changes to help things make more sense. Change "This guys" to "These guys" and possibly change "Certainly, they've set" to "They've certainly set".

Hope that helps!

Reply JoKeR, February 26th, 2017, 9:49 pm

@Flik: Thank you very much for the help. My translator went to bed already. ;)
I was in a quarrel with myself about the position of the word "certainly". I had it like in your example but I wasn't sure and it looked odd to me and I changed it.

Well... My English is still not good enough. *le sigh*

Reply Flik, February 26th, 2017, 10:53 pm

@JoKeR: You're welcome! You do well with the English you know! With a few good people around we can always help you out.

Reply Seven Rain, February 26th, 2017, 10:59 pm

Battle Mom knows what's up!

Reply JoKeR, February 27th, 2017, 9:39 am

@Seven Rain: Yeah she knows.

There were once two clans in competition.
They offered the same piece of service.
One of those clans got crushed and dissolved. Their members wandered the lands and searched for new occupations.
Many took other jobs and some settled down to family life.

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